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Reader X Toshiro Hitsugaya
The Watermelon Vine
You’re P.O.V.
When would he finally be home? You had waited for so long. The watermelons had ripened and rotted on the vine countless times since he left. You hadn’t even eaten one. You were hoping that he hadn’t either. Before he had left, you had both promised not to eat any until he returned. You were quickly losing hope. Soon you might just give up. But you just couldn’t. You were too stubborn for that. The wait was tearing you apart from the inside out.  Defeated, you fall to your knees amid the melon vines.
Hitsugaya’s P.O.V.
I am finally coming home to you. Please wait for me, don’t give up hope. I’m coming (y/n). Have one remaining on the vine for me.
You’re P.O.V.
“(y/n) wake up!!!! There is a letter for you!” You’re (e/c) eyes slowly open. Could it be from him? It couldn’t be. You had given up hope long ago. But there was that one stupid, unlearning part of you that couldn’t help but make you wish. You silently rolled out of bed and walked toward the kitchen. Your mother handed you the letter with a relieved, happy grin on her face. Looking at her questioningly, you took the letter and walked outside toward the watermelon fields. There was no way you wanted her looking over your shoulder as you read it. As you slowly opened the letter, you plopped down amid the green, striped fruit. As you slowly, read the letter, your eyes drink in every word. Your heart begins beating in ways it hasn’t for years. He was finally coming home. You shoot up and are about to sprint back to your house to tell everyone but a hand shoots out and someone’s arm quickly snakes around your waist in an unbroken grip. The arm pulls you back and your back meets with something tough and hard. As you turn your head around in question, your eyes meet with sea green eyes and snow white hair. “(y/n).” he said, with joy in his eyes and voice. He turned you around and crushed you in his arms and buried his face in your hair. You slowly wrap your arms around his neck and place your head on his shoulder. “(y/n),” he murmured. “I missed you so much.” “Where have you been?” you whisper, close to tears. “All that matters is that you’re back in my arms and I in yours,” he whispered contentedly. You break out of his grasp and he looks at you questioningly. You lean down, break a watermelon from its vine, and held it up for him to see. “How about you and me break this in half and finally eat one?” His mouth slowly turns up as it dawns on him what you mean. “Definitely. But first…” he leans toward you and molds his lips to yours. When he finally pulls away, he grins grabs your hand, and pulls you toward the house. “Let’s go, together.” As he pulls you toward the house, both of you laughing, you quietly think in the deepest of your hearts that for now, being together was more than enough.
This is the first Deviation I have ever done so comment, favorites, and feedback are most welcome! Thank you for taking the time to read this! :tighthug: You have no idea how much it means to me... :iconcryforeverplz:
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ComelittlechildrenCP Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
It's so emotional and super good!!! Miuna Crying Icon 
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Awwww thank you so much!!! AND BABY DON'T CRY~~ :icontissueplz: Thank you so much for reading my work :iconrainbowbummiecakeplz: :iconnyanlaplz: :iconsuperheroglompplz: :iconglompglompplz:
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chillynpepper Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved it! So beautiful I had tears in the corner of my eyes! I LOVE IT!!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
AHHHHHHHHH.... That's too much.... But it makes me so happy that you loved it that much! :icononiskiplz: :iconlarollplz: :icongwompplz: :iconredbullglompplz: :iconcameraglompplz:
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HomunculiEnvyLova Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwww this is so cute 
poor toshiro all that time and not a single watermelon
i cry for you toshiroBunny Emoji-07 (Emoji Cry) [V1] 
well done i loved it
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Awwww thank you so much!! :iconsupertighthugplz: It made my day to see that you read my story and I hope that you really enjoyed it!!:iconfabulousplz: :iconkermityayplz:
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imaginethefeels Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awhh.. my Toshiro.. Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2]   this is awesome and kawaii-desuu. SUGOI~!  Anime Emoji (Oh yay dance) [V3] 
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Ehehehh..... :iconblushplz: Thank you so much!!! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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LittleEmers27 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*dies*
This is...
Oh my gosh...
*glomps Toshiro forever*
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Awesome job by the way~! ^.^
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Thank you so much!! It makes me so happy when people take the time to read my work!! :icongwompplz: I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. (In a non-weird way of course. XD) 
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LittleEmers27 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are sooo welcome!! ^.^
haha It was really nice to read your work! :dummy: :la: :iconsupguywootplz:
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH TOO. (mutual way of course. XD)
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cherry1227 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
The fuckin feels!!!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
:la: THANK YOU SO MUCH MY FRIEND!!! :iconiloveyouplz: That means so much to me! :iconhappytearsplz: THANK YOU FOR READDDDINNNGGGG~ :iconspazattackplz:
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moonlightsorceress1 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
THIS IS SO CUTE OH MY GOG!!!!!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
:bow: :iconfabulousplz: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, FRIEND! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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moonlightsorceress1 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
:icondragonglomp: Np thanks for writing it ^^ :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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Perverchian-nyan Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
....SO awesome....!!!! ILUVEUSOMUCH
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
:shocked: I honestly never thought anyone read this... :iconiloveyoumostplz: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!! :iconhappytearsplz: :love:
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Perverchian-nyan Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
kidding? I loved IT. please, keep writing

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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Your too kind! :D :iconembarrasedplz: 
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Perverchian-nyan Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
No, I'm truthful
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CloeOrihira Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
The feels!!!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
XD Thank you for reading! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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bookworm30000 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
This is so cute<3
Thank you for writing it!!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
:la: THANK YOU SO MUCH~ :iconsupertighthugplz: Thank you so much for reading it! :iconspazattackplz:
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bookworm30000 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww your welcome
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Your too nice
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
:la: I JUST AM SO HAPPY~ :squee:
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minatolover808 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
this story is so very CUTE!!!!!!!!Icon for FiretailCat 
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
That means so much to me! Thank you so much! :iconsobplz: It honestly makes me so happy when people take the time to comment on my work. Thank you. :tighthug:
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AlyssaTheHedgehog90 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This was soo cute..! By the way, I liked that it had Watermelons, which is actually Toshiro's favorite fruit.
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Thank you so much! I know, that's why I decided to write a fanfic with watermelons! ^.^ I was actually sitting at my dinner table with a watermelon in front of me when I got the idea! Thanks so much for reading! :iconthankyouplz:
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AlyssaTheHedgehog90 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wish I could write like you..! Oh, and I should be thanking YOU for writing it; so, thanks! :iconclapplz:
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BeautifulDisplosion Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ASDFGHJKL so cute X3

But I'd probs end up glomping him. Be like "WHY THE HELL WERE YOU GONE SO LONG?"
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Are you sure? You don't think its too cheesy, do you? :iconcheeseplz:
I would too, but I feel like if I made the Reader do that, it would have TOTALLY ruined the moment. XD He would be all like, "Reader, I love you!" And you would say something like, "OH YEAH? WELL I HATE YOU FOR BEING GONE." and then she would stomp away... Actually, that sounds interesting... Oh well, next time!! :shrug: :iconpervyhitsugayaplz:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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BeautifulDisplosion Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD

No problemo

And thank you for helping me discover a pervy Toshiro plz account omg
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
You're welcome! :D
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BeautifulDisplosion Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
X3
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karkat2297 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
aww he is never getting away again I hope he knows that
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Seriously. Tie him to the chair if you have to. He isn't getting away from us again. Thank you for reading!! :tighthug: Its hard for me to have people read my work and I thank you from the bottom of my heart!! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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SamSam2001 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
It awesome I love it both watermelons and toshiro r my fav things in the world of fruit and anime in oneXD
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Thank you! I was trying to think for an idea when I realized that I was staring at a watermelon, and suddenly, I had an idea!! :D Again, thank you so much. I don't get very many people to read my work, and I really appreciate you taking the time! :glomp:
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SamSam2001 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Ur welcome
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sistersamsung97 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
This story has 2 things I love...WATERMELON and TOSHIRO!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Thank you!!!! This has two of my most favorite things too. Toshiro and Toshiro.... and watermelons of course.... sorry, did i say two?? XD
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sistersamsung97 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
You're welcome!!!!!!! XD
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